Selasa, 16 November 2010

poem ::

good-bye, mom ..
I looked at your typical face .. .
where all laughing happily .. .
My heart was touched commemorate you .. .
be sincere affection .. .

from you, mom .. .
how lonely I own .. .
however, I'm sure all your prayers .. .
 
always you dedicate to me .. .

forgive me, mom .. .
because I never return your affection .. .
till when you go .. .
only regret in my heart .. .

good-bye, mother .. .
forgive me and forgive my mistake .. .






" of the poem, it can be concluded when a mother who had left her child.and the child is not able to reply to what has been given by her mother.she regretted not being able to reply her mother's affection. "


writer :  Nafi'atuz Zahro (x5)

12 komentar:

  1. mother did everything for us,,:))

    BalasHapus
  2. Nice ..
    This poem really opened our eyes of the heart .
    But mother is very necessary in the life of each.

    BalasHapus
  3. like it...

    oooaoaoaaaahh... mommy. . .


    --izza--

    BalasHapus
  4. yahh .. .
    I made this poem, that we realize how important a mother .. .
    without a mother, we will not be able to see the beauty of the world .. .

    love you, mom ..

    BalasHapus
  5. you make me remember my mom, i miss my home, my mom, my dad, my sister and everything in home.......>_<

    BalasHapus
  6. good poem...
    this poem make us realize that mother is a crussial person for us and a great woman forour family,although she still alive or had passed away.
    so, we must obey all of her advice and don't make she cry because of our bad behavior !

    BalasHapus
  7. i agree with you, the mother is everything for us ..

    BalasHapus
  8. I think everyone love mom..
    she always in our heart,, :)
    everytime

    BalasHapus
  9. aaaaaaaahhhh..
    so sweet ...

    we must always love our mom ..
    although she angry to us ..
    cos that mean she love to us ...
    :))

    BalasHapus